The main weaknesses of this draft is that it has only one elevator and the elevator is not well thought out. Besides, the bridge lacks a believable supporting structure. Moreover, the concept of power is not properly expressed in the form of the bridge.
My choice for a valley: the Grand Canyon, located in America, home to Oprah Winfrey and Lady Gaga.
Image link for The Grand Canyon: http://nouman.info/wp-content/uploads/2011/04/Time-Is-Running-away-Of-The-Grand-Canyon.jpg
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